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雅思范文解析|消息对人的影响
发布来源: 舒琪学姐 发布时间:2021-02-23


Hello大家好,我是舒琪学姐。


今天的题目,是关于消息对人的影响。



【20190413大陆】Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 这篇文章我采取“正-反-正”的结构,在阐述完正反双方的观点后,我会反驳(削弱)反方的观点,所以我的观点实际还是站在正方。(双边+自己观点的题型,可以选择加强某一方或削弱某一方,具体看哪种写法可以写出更多的思路和表达来)


People have different views about whether celebrities’ influence can benefit charitable causes. Superficial or unstable it may be, I believe their advocacy is effective in raise the mass public’s awareness of the charity.


Some people argue that celebrities can act as diplomats, fund-raisers, and humanitarians in philanthropy, as their words often have more reach and global identity. For the public, a familiar voice is more trustworthy and compelling, making them more willing to follow good examples. Their fans, though originally with little interest in the welfare of disadvantaged groups and areas, will volunteer to help in response to their idols’ appeal.


However, opponents doubt the effectiveness of their actions, deriding them for promoting superficial and sometimes misguided interventions. As most megastars are no experts of international aid, they often generate a lot of hype which is insignificant, sometimes even blurring the line between doing charity and exuding their personal charm. There also lies a risk that as most of the followers do charity merely out of the adoration of their idols, once the idols’ reputations are tarnished, the good cause may be forgotten at once.


I personally do not agree with this argument because people will naturally find joy once they start a charitable cause. They will feel a sense of fulfilment when they see the underprivileged people’s needs are satisfied due to their kindness. Therefore, even though a famous person ceases to be influential, they can continue the cause motivated by positive feedbacks.


In conclusion, it is a good thing that more people notice the need for international aid thanks to celebrities’ advocacy. And such kindness, once started, will be hard to stop.

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学姐小贴士


大家知道雅思作文里有四项评分标准,其中最容易被大家忽视的就是Lexical resources。


词汇上拿不到高分的情况分为两种。


一类是多样性不足。导致这一种的情况主要是疏于拓展词汇,有些同学认为雅思作文的用词只需要自然、准确即可,这其实是走向了“极简主义”的极端。自然、准确固然重要,但如果不停地重复用词,尤其是不停地重复题目里的词汇,词汇的分数是肯定不会高的。


另一类是准确性不足。这类学生背了很多单词,一到考场就一股脑地堆积上去。却忽视了词汇是否适用于语境、搭配是否正确、词性是否使用恰当等具体运用上的细节。对于第二种情况,词汇得分最多6分,也不会更高了。


要想准确的运用词汇,需要去了解每个单词的拼写、词义、语域、内涵意义、语法形态和搭配,工作量其实是很大的。不仅是处在备考期的同学,包括我们整个英语教学,都一直是重语法而轻词汇,这一偏差这几年才慢慢纠正过来。


针对词汇和语法表达,学姐特意开了一套Mini课。正课部分主要讲词汇和表达;配套的视频我会尽量给大家多讲一些背景知识和例子,帮助大家理解。这样大家就不用机械地去背诵论点,在写作的时候也可以顺着我的讲解思路更好地展开。

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